Stable Places into the done pile!

So, chapter 16 is done and I've started on chapter 17. Pretty good stuff. Chapter 16 brought tears to my eyes, as it's well supposed to. The transition from mushy romance to passionate lovemaking required a few more words to break its original abruptness, but I think I've got it.

Chapter 17 starts with Dove renouncing sex on weekdays. Yeah, that'll last about three days.

One of the problems with writing gonzo is that there's a lot more sex on the screen. Makes it harder to write in public.

Earlier: A new story: The Comet

Later: Fly, story! Fly and be free!