Chapter 4 of Honest Impulses, “Working Together,” posted!

One of the things I appreciate most about sites like Archive of Our Own and Fan Fiction is the notes, the part after the story where the author chats about the current chapter or story, what they did and how they did it. Fanfic sites are often trying hard to teach one another the very craft of writing, so talking and reading about process gives other participants insight into how authors are thinking even as they're writing.

Obviously, in a traditional novel, that doesn't work. But I've never been a traditional novelist. I posted chapter four of Honest Impulses today, Working Together, which finally gets our two protagonists into the same room, where lots of emotional fireworks seem to be going off all at once. Poor, confused robot and her equally confused new friend. But that's the nice thing about this story; I've tried to apply a lot of McKee's Story theories to this novel, so there are lots of emotional flips where the character starts out feeling secure and ends up insecure, and then gets flipped back and forth at higher and higher intervals until something breaks.

Anyway, enjoy!

Earlier: <i>Honest Impulses: A Whole New World</i> is now available! New story!

Later: When it comes to plot strategies, I'm all over the map